Wednesday, August 5, 2009

free verse war poem

why did you do this America?
send all your men to
where, an AK-47 is a novalty
in amongst all the poverty
all those people at home watching alligi

this is war yeah,
an RPG, it destroys so many lives
and a grenade is part of the renegade
a head comes off when you swing a blade

you'd drop a bomb on japan
why not afghanistan, pakistan, iraq
or iran.
thse soldiers they all carry an MP-5,
a para, a knife and a glock.
who are they, gangsta bean?

what would ya do if they surrendered to you?
would you kill em all?
would you forgive em?
or maybe throw em in a jail or a torture camp?

but still you should ask yourself the question
do ya feel lucky?...

2 comments:

Tom P> said...

this is a very good free verse poem
it shows u understand about poetry and war, tis isa very goodly based poem

J Reimers said...

:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
5 out of 5 smiles
:) ;) :p :D :O